Something I suggest making it more OP is to make is to add an effect on at least Mastered UI Goku that says, "If a card is unaffected by card effects, cannot be targeted by card effects, cannot be destroyed by battle, or cannot be destroyed by card effects, it can be." or something along those lines as it completely negates card protection.
Now, the third most common Pokmon in the TCG might be a bit more difficult to guess
A third Jasmine is not necessary in this deck, but if you want it, the 1900 defense and drawing ability can justify adding it instead of Golden Ladybug
Ojer Taq, Deepest Foundation / Temple of Civilization Look, its hard to argue with Ojer Taq, Deepest Foundation as a good token commander
Said new players are undoubtedly the target audience for this monumental shift